Moriah Leila

Hi there! I am here to do your review as requested. Usually I will break a story down into parts and really dissect it. However, with the length of this ...

Hi there! *waves* I am here to do a review for you. It is going to be intensive, so don't be overwhelmed. I'll start with the positives and then get ...

Hi there, here to serve you up a tasty review, as requested. I want to start out by pointing out the positives and then we can get into the nitty ...

Agh, I am not the first to review your work. :( But I will try to make sure it is one my very best reviews since you are my buddy! ...

Hello! I am very excited to review your work! I also noticed that you're relatively new to YWS, so welcome! I don't always use that many exclamation points, I swear! ...

Hi there! I see that you're relatively new to the site, so I just want to extend you a warm welcome. *Gives you a cookie.* It's a warm cookie by ...

My daughter's adore My Little Pony and since I stay home with them, I've watched like every episode twenty times. So I know exactly what you're talking about in this ...

Here I am, finally, to do your review! I am going to apologize yet again for the extended delay before I got to this critique. First off, I want to ...

Hi, I thought I would review this chapter as well since I have a little free time. First off, the beginning of this chapter drags a bit. Don't be afraid ...

Sorry it took me awhile to get to this review. It has been a crazy busy weekend! So let's dive right in, shall we? Later, during a rare moment of ...

Here is your review, as requested! Dark land, a place which earned its fame from all over the nation after the establishment of Dark Land Institute of Psychology and Research ...

Hey, I am back! So technically, I wouldn't consider this a chapter since it is only a paragraph. But we can fix that! I love that there is major drama ...

Cool idea, having the counterpart of Rapunzel being a bat mutant born from a moonbeam. Really cool plot idea. I am interested to see where this goes. Now for my ...

Hello there. I saw that this hadn't gotten any reviews yet, so I thought I would check it out. Even though I haven't read the previous chapters, I am very ...

Hiya! I am back for another round! Since I am the first to critique this, I am going to really dissect it. I hope you don't mind. I notice while ...